Comments on: Who is the Greatest Individual????? Its… LOUIE!!!!!!!

By: MrSmart

MrSmart — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 23:37:26 +0000

Interesting journey through the comments. You clearly made some excellent improvements. Great images and detailed information. You could still break up the text a little more.

By: ksull108

ksull108 — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 13:41:01 +0000

HEY koney. I like the new changes made on your blog and it creates a better flow. Additionally, after reading my last post I want to revoke my statement that your article, “needs to connect to modern day examples…” When I think about it Louie made more direct impacts than my great individual, Stalin. I believe the reason for my change in opinion is due to the addition of photos….so basically good work. =]

By: myuil105

myuil105 — Wed, 10 Jun 2009 22:39:14 +0000

I agree with the first part of Kevin’s argument, but not so much the rest. Vaccines are extremely important for preventative purposes, and I am sure that it is more than likely that no one WANTS to know what the world would be like without one for anthrax. Both Kevin and I know with our studies in psychology that comfort is vital to a person’s psychological well-being, so to say that silkworms do no effect us today would be a falsity. Also, without silk worms there is no telling what other species could be extinct today. Milk is important for nutritious values; I do not think i have to explain how many vital vitamins and minerals are found in dairy products.
I really liked it Kony. And I just stood up for you.

By: cmayo108

cmayo108 — Wed, 10 Jun 2009 12:58:37 +0000

Very good blog; it had a lot of legit factual support. I am actually convinced that Louie Pasture was an important person if he did come up with vaccines for Anthrax and rabies and such. And I appreciate milk so I appreciate Louie.

By: ksull108

ksull108 — Tue, 09 Jun 2009 17:08:54 +0000

Alright Konyinsola, you had some legit arguments that were well structured by great factual information! The three concrete arguments were well formed and I found your tone convincing. However, there were no hyperlinks and one picture so the blog turned very dry. Also i don’t know if milk, silk, and vaccines really effect us today or neccesarily make a person the greatest individual in history. Needs to connect to modern day examples and concepts.

By: twrig108

twrig108 — Tue, 09 Jun 2009 00:06:41 +0000

Well my comment won’t be as good as Steven’s, but I do believe that the layout makes this look like word vomit (pardon my french). I think you could have broken it SOMEWHERE lol But I like your last two sentences ;]

By: sgent105

sgent105 — Mon, 08 Jun 2009 21:13:49 +0000

Good grief… you almost buried me in the amount of information you gave. It’s…staggering, that’s for sure. In fact, I didn’t know half the products Louie Pasture produced…all I knew was that he made milk safe to drink. Your project is majestic in size and scope. The only problem I see is lack of hypertexted words. That aside, this project is very convincing and titanic in almost everything. Well done.